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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Does this sentence sound goo dand completely perfect?

By destroying Gunthar’s intelligence network, Kitiara ensured that the flying citadel she possessed would remain a secret for as long as possible.
  

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Anonymous By destroying Gunthar’s intelligence network, Kitiara ensured that the flying citadel she possessed would remain a secret for as long as possible. Looks good to me. CJ

  • Anonymous By destroying Gunthar’s intelligence network, Kitiara ensured that the flying citadel she possessed would remain a secret for as long as possible.
  • Looks good to me.
  • CJ
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Anonymous By destroying Gunthar’s intelligence network, Kitiara ensured that the flying citadel she possessed would remain a secret for as long as possible.
Looks good to me.

CJ

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