Does this sentence sound fine?
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Does this sentence sound fine?
"After specifying the inclusion criteria and selecting the participants, the questionnaires were distributed at the appropriate time and were completed and collected."
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This sentence has a so-called "dangling" participle problem: grammatically, the implied subject of "specifying" is "questionnaires". Obviously we know that this meaning is not actually intended, but still it is not a good sentence structurally.
- This sentence has a so-called "dangling" participle problem: grammatically, the implied subject of "specifying" is "questionnaires".
- Obviously we know that this meaning is not actually intended, but still it is not a good sentence structurally.
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This sentence has a so-called "dangling" participle problem: grammatically, the implied subject of "specifying" is "questionnaires". Obviously we know that this meaning is not actually intended, but still it is not a good sentence structurally.
0You can fix it like this:
After the inclusion criteria were specified and the participants selected, the questionnaires ....
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