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Gillyflower Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Does this sentence sound fine?

Hi,

Does the below sentence sound fine?

"Among these twelve lights (two rows of six lights), only six can turn on, which turns on randomly at intervals of 4-6 seconds."


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NO. Among these twelve lights (two rows of six lights), only six can turn on at one time, which turn on randomly at an interval of 4-6 seconds. com.

— Nathandh

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  • Among these twelve lights (two rows of six lights), only six can turn on at one time, which turn on randomly at an interval of 4-6 seconds.
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NO.

Among these twelve lights (two rows of six lights), only six can turn on at one time, which turn on randomly at an interval of 4-6 seconds.

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gillyflower"Among these twelve lights (two rows of six lights), only six can glow, randomly at intervals of 4-6 seconds."

I think this sounds better.

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