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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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For the aid he provided, the god Zivilyn was banished from the heavens for five hundred years along with the loss of his divine powers and was forced to inhabit the body of an elderly man; however, to him the survival of the elven race was worth it.
  

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For the aid he provided, the *** Zivilyn was banished from the heavens for five hundred years, lost his divine powers , and was forced to inhabit the body of an aged man; however , but to him the survival of the elven race was worth it.

  • For the aid he provided, the *** Zivilyn was banished from the heavens for five hundred years, lost his divine powers , and was forced to inhabit the body of an aged man; however , but to him the survival of the elven race was worth it.
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For the aid he provided, the *** Zivilyn was banished from the heavens for five hundred years, lost his divine powers, and was forced to inhabit the body of an aged man; however, but to him the survival of the elven race was worth it.

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