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Rommel Posted 11 years ago
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Does this sentence seem okay?
Does this sentence seem okay? If it's not, how can it be fine?
His wife suddenly frowned upon realizing that her dream of having kids wouldn’t come true without him.
His wife suddenly frowned upon realizing that her dream of having kids wouldn’t come true without him.
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Would it be better if I rewrite it as His wife suddenly frowned when she realized the impossibility of her bearing children without him ?
- Would it be better if I rewrite it as His wife suddenly frowned when she realized the impossibility of her bearing children without him ?
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Would it be better if I rewrite it as His wife suddenly frowned when she realized the impossibility of her bearing children without him?
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