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Naumira Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

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Hi there
Can you correct this sentence:
During her work, she has demonstrated excelent ability conduct research from activity planning, data collection, data cleaning and preparing database.

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Thanks It is not a natural sentence. Do you mean to say this? During her work (with XYZ), she has demonstrated excellent abilities in conducting research, planning and managing the data base.

— Dimsumexpress

  • Thanks It is not a natural sentence.
  • Do you mean to say this?
  • During her work (with XYZ), she has demonstrated excellent abilities in conducting research, planning and managing the data base.
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naumiraHi thereCan you correct this sentence:During her work, she has demonstrated excelent ability conduct research from activity planning, data collection, data cleaning and preparing database.Thanks
It is not a natural sentence. Do you mean to say this?

During her work (with XYZ), she has demonstrated excellent abilities in conducting research, p
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Thanks alot for your correction dimsumexpress
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Hi, Naumira. Here is how I would correct this sentence:

During her work, she has demonstrated excellent ability to conduct research--activity planning, data collection, data cleaning, and database preparation.



1.) I corrected the spelling of EXCELLENT.



2.) I made the structure of the series of 4 items more parallel.



Hope th
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wow Grammar Glitch, you are really kind, thanks for helping me, see you soon
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