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Aqua 0315 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Does this sentence make sense to the English speakers

The original sentence I wanted my students to write is "there have always been recommendations made to athletes about foods that could enhance their athletic performance"

But some of them wrote like this : there have always been recommendations about foods that could enhance their athletic performance made to athletes.

Can 'made to athletes' which modifies 'recommendations' be that far apart from the modification target??

Waiting for your kind answers~~

  

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aqua 0315 Can 'made to athletes' which modifies 'recommendations' be that far apart from the modification target?? Technically, yes, but it's a stretch. I would not do that.

  • aqua 0315 Can 'made to athletes' which modifies 'recommendations' be that far apart from the modification target??
  • Technically, yes, but it's a stretch.
  • I would not do that.
  • I'd use the other one: ...
  • recommendations made to athletes about foods that could ...
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aqua 0315Can 'made to athletes' which modifies 'recommendations' be that far apart from the modification target??

Technically, yes, but it's a stretch. I would not do that. I'd use the other one:

... recommendations made to athletes about foods that could ...

CJ

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