0
Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Does this sentence make sense?

Ultimately, however, it could be argued that terrace deposition throughout
the catchment was a consequence of a combination of both human and climatic impacts, as
increased precipitation and aggradational events such as flooding events, both catalysts of
terrace deposition, are caused by both climate and anthropogenic forcing,
whether directly in the case of landscape interference, or indirectly in the case of fossil fuel
emissions following the Anthropocene.



Does the sentence above make sense? Is it too long?

  

Top answer

It's much too long, and that makes it hard to understand. Try to rewrite it, and post your revise version. OK?

  • It's much too long, and that makes it hard to understand.
  • Try to rewrite it, and post your revise version.
  • OK?
  • Clive
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0

It's much too long, and that makes it hard to understand.

Try to rewrite it, and post your revise version.

OK?

Clive

Related Questions