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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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The text in bold below is a title. How can it be shortened? Note: Edale is a location in Derbyshire, UK.


Fluvial Terrace Deposition around the Edale Valley, Derbyshire, as a Consequence of Local Catchment Events or a Response to Holocene Climate Change


Here is my effort (I still think it sounds awkward):


Local Catchment Events or Regional Climate Change as the Cause of Fluvial Terrace Deposition around Edale, Derbyshire,


  

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Local catchment events due to fluvial terrace depsosition or responce to modern-day climate change results in fluvial terrace deposition

  • Local catchment events due to fluvial terrace depsosition or responce to modern-day climate change results in fluvial terrace deposition
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Local catchment events due to fluvial terrace depsosition

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responce to modern-day climate change results in fluvial terrace deposition

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