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According to Rostow’s (1959) model, The Stages of Economic Growth, it was a traditional society, a sugar-based monoculture where agriculture accounted for 25% of GDP (Lange, 2009).
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"According to" could be better. It sounds like Rostow appraised the very society you're writing about. Also, the book is not a model.
- "According to" could be better.
- It sounds like Rostow appraised the very society you're writing about.
- Also, the book is not a model.
- " A book title takes italics.
- You drop an initial article from a title when it is mentioned inline, as I have done (but not when it is parenthetical, as you did).
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"According to" could be better. It sounds like Rostow appraised the very society you're writing about. Also, the book is not a model. Maybe "By Rostow’s model in his 1959 Stages of Economic Growth, it was a traditional society, a sugar-based monoculture where agriculture accounted for 25% of GDP (Lange, 2009)."
A book title takes italics. You drop an initial article from a title w
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