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In Riskikesh, I got the chance to interview Sadhvi Saraswati, a former monk, who incidentally has a Ph.D. in Religion from Stanford University. According to his research, there is a range of scientific evidence to support the healing powers Yoga affords to people, specifically in relation to their mental, physical and overall emotional well-being.

  

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It needs simplifying. D. in Religion from Stanford University.

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  • in Religion from Stanford University.
  • His research found a range of scientific evidence to support the healing powers of yoga for our mental, physical and emotional well-being.
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It needs simplifying.

In Riskikesh, I interviewed Sadhvi Saraswati, a former monk with a Ph.D. in Religion from Stanford University. His research found a range of scientific evidence to support the healing powers of yoga for our mental, physical and emotional well-being.

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