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Anintita Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Does this sentence make sense?

The primary concerns that you should quit smoking are your health and others'.
I'm not sure that this sentence is correct, please clarify
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Top answer

The primary concerns when considering quitting smoking are your health and that of others.

— Fivejedjon

  • The primary concerns when considering quitting smoking are your health and that of others.
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The primary concerns when considering quitting smoking are your health and that of others.
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Thank you for your kindness. But, I have a doubt that is it okay when the sentence has so many Verb ing.
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AnintitaThank you for your kindness. But, I have a doubt that is it okay when the sentence has so many Verb ing.
You may set aside your doubts. fivejedjon's sentence is fine.
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Maybe you could list another concern than say ect.?

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Anonymous

Maybe you could list another concern then say etc.?

Yes, that's possible.

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