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Ming Yin Posted 13 years ago
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Does this sentence make sense?
Does the sentence below make sense? Thanks!
"I had to design a burglar alarm system that would beep annoyingly forever if the user didn't click the "RESET" button when the burglar entered the room either via the front door, left-hand side door, right-hand side window or front window (the "front window" alarm is activated when the burglar steals the vase as the precious item is resting on a pressure pad) and set the alarm off."
"I had to design a burglar alarm system that would beep annoyingly forever if the user didn't click the "RESET" button when the burglar entered the room either via the front door, left-hand side door, right-hand side window or front window (the "front window" alarm is activated when the burglar steals the vase as the precious item is resting on a pressure pad) and set the alarm off."
Top answer
It's much too long, and ridiculously complicated. Break it into shorter sentences. Clive
- It's much too long, and ridiculously complicated.
- Break it into shorter sentences.
- Clive
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It's much too long, and ridiculously complicated. Break it into shorter sentences.
Clive
Clive
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