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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Does this sentence make sense?

Can "succeeding" and "employment" be used in this context:

Succeeding Walmart I began employment at Costco, where I am currently employed.

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And can "subsequently" and "began work at" be used in this context:

Subsequently after Walmart I began work at Costco, where I am currently employed.

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Succeeding Walmart I began employment at Costco, where I am currently employed. -- 'Succeeding' is unusual there. After Walmart, I began work at Costco, where I am currently employed .

  • Succeeding Walmart I began employment at Costco, where I am currently employed.
  • -- 'Succeeding' is unusual there.
  • After Walmart, I began work at Costco, where I am currently employed .
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Succeeding Walmart I began employment at Costco, where I am currently employed.-- 'Succeeding' is unusual there.

After Walmart, I began work at Costco, where I am currently employed.

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