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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Does this sentence make sense?

Does this sentence make sense?

I think that people vitrine their experiences with domestic violence through song; as it releases a lot of anger, pain and becomes a powerful song.
  

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What do you mean instead of 'vitrine'?
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I believe the author is incorrectly using the noun "vitrine" as a verb, trying to convey an action that relates to the noun's meaning. Verbs such as: showcase, reveal, exhibit or display, would serve the purpose in this case.
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AnonymousDoes this sentence make sense?

I think that people vitrine their experiences with domestic violence through song; as it releases a lot of anger, pain and becomes a powerful song.
I suggest 'ventilate' as a fitting verb.

The sentence could go like this:
I think that people ventilate their exp
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corfu linguait helps releasing a
Let's just wait for the original poster to explain, shall we?
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AnonymousI think that people vitrine showcase? display? their experiences with domestic violence through song; as it releases a lot of anger, pain and becomes a powerful song.
It makes some sense, but it's not really right. This may be closer to what you want.

I think that people use song to express t

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