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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Does this sentence make sense??

The great military helped make Rome successful by bringing its country pride and many victorious battles along with attributal achievements and conquests.
  

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It makes sense, but it is not very natural. Its military helped make Rome proud and successful by bringing it many victories, conquests and other achievements.

  • It makes sense, but it is not very natural.
  • Its military helped make Rome proud and successful by bringing it many victories, conquests and other achievements.
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It makes sense, but it is not very natural.

Its military helped make Rome proud and successful by bringing it many victories, conquests and other achievements.

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