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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Does this sentence make sense?
Hi, I am writing a cover letter. Does this sentence make sense? Does it sound ok?
Working under Becki Manning, The Executive Director of the Arts Council, exposed me to the exciting world of the chamber and the great things that people are doing there.
Working under Becki Manning, The Executive Director of the Arts Council, exposed me to the exciting world of the chamber and the great things that people are doing there.
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It makes sense. I don't know what it means. I might put a - instead of the first comma or put the Exec Director...
- It makes sense.
- I don't know what it means.
- I might put a - instead of the first comma or put the Exec Director...
- in brackets instead but that is a matter of style.
- I would put - out of choice, the could then be in capitals as you show it rather than the as it has to be on the other options.
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It makes sense. I don't know what it means. I might put a - instead of the first comma or put the Exec Director... in brackets instead but that is a matter of style. I would put - out of choice, the could then be in capitals as you show it rather than the as it has to be on the other options.
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AnonymousWorking under Becki Manning, The Executive Director of the Arts Council, exposed me to the exciting world of the chamber and the great things that people are doing there.Working under Becki Manning, executive director of the Arts Council, exposed me to the exciting world of the chamber and the great things that people are doing there.
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