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Mayaya Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Does this sentence make sense?

How powerful is the British central government, having in mind the funding, the shaping of the local policies and the officials who operate them?

Thanks in advance!
  

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Hi, How powerful is the British central government, having in mind the funding, the shaping of the local policies and the officials who operate them? The phrase 'havng in mind' seems to me vague and unclear. In addition.

— Clive

  • Hi, How powerful is the British central government, having in mind the funding, the shaping of the local policies and the officials who operate them?
  • The phrase 'havng in mind' seems to me vague and unclear.
  • In addition.
  • it is not clear what them refers to.
  • We don't 'operate local policies'.
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Hi,
How powerful is the British central government, having in mind the funding, the shaping of the local policies and the officials who operate them?

The phrase 'havng in mind' seems to me vague and unclear. In addition. it is not clear what them refers to. We don't 'operate local policies'.
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Thanks again!

Maya.
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