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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Does this sentence make sense?
"Choose wisely for the journey is only as meaningful as crossing over the finish line."
Is the grammar and the wording okay? How could I make it sound better? I am trying to say that the journey is nothing if you don't reach your goal.
Is the grammar and the wording okay? How could I make it sound better? I am trying to say that the journey is nothing if you don't reach your goal.
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" Is the grammar and the wording okay? How could I make it sound better? I am trying to say that the journey is nothing if you don't reach your goal.
- " Is the grammar and the wording okay?
- How could I make it sound better?
- I am trying to say that the journey is nothing if you don't reach your goal.
- Seems reasonable to me.
- If you speak of a finishing line, perhaps you should say 'a race' rather than 'a journey'.
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Hi,
"Choose wisely, for the journey is only as meaningful as crossing over the finish line."
Is the grammar and the wording okay? How could I make it sound better? I am trying to say that the journey is nothing if you don't reach your goal.
Seems reasonable to me.
If you speak of a finishing line, perhaps you should say 'a race' rather than 'a jo
"Choose wisely, for the journey is only as meaningful as crossing over the finish line."
Is the grammar and the wording okay? How could I make it sound better? I am trying to say that the journey is nothing if you don't reach your goal.
Seems reasonable to me.
If you speak of a finishing line, perhaps you should say 'a race' rather than 'a jo
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