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Hagumi Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Does this sentence make sense?

"Playing violin is a pleasure of my mind, and nothing can take the place of it. "

I wish to know if it is grammatically correct.

Thank you.
  

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It is grammattically correct, but it sounds a bit awkward to me. Do you mean that the pleasure is imaginary? Or that it eases your mind?

— Philip

  • It is grammattically correct, but it sounds a bit awkward to me.
  • Do you mean that the pleasure is imaginary?
  • Or that it eases your mind?
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It is grammattically correct, but it sounds a bit awkward to me. Do you mean that the pleasure is imaginary? Or that it eases your mind?
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Pleasure that eases my mind.

Would you make it sound natural?

Thank you.
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I mean that it eases my mind.

If I say, "Playing violin is a pleasure that eases my mind." does it sound better?

Thank you.
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