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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Does this sentence make sense.

In the novel, The Great Gatsby, by F. Scott Fitzgerald, the story of James Gatsby is observed as he makes his way through myriad trials in order to reach his own dream; reconnecting with his past love Daisy Buchannan.
  

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The sentence as written is largely correct, but I do have a few suggestion which might improve it. The crossouts are my corrections and the color ba r words are my suggested replacements. In the F.

  • The sentence as written is largely correct, but I do have a few suggestion which might improve it.
  • The crossouts are my corrections and the color ba r words are my suggested replacements.
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  • Scott Fitzgerald , the story of James Gatsby is observed as he makes his way through myriad trials in order to fulfill reach his own dream ; : reconnecting with his past love Daisy Buchannan.
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The sentence as written is largely correct, but I do have a few suggestion which might improve it. The crossouts are my corrections and the color bar words are my suggested replacements.

In the F. Scott Fitzgerald's novel, The Great Gatsby

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