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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Does this sentence make grammatical sense?

I am looking out the window at our garden, cared for every week by a troop of landscapers armed with rakes who call themselves “David and co.”
  

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You need a comma after 'rakes' so we know it is the landscapers, not the rakes, who call themselves "David and Co.".
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I don't think the comma helps.
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This is the sentence:

I am looking out the window at the garden, cared for every month by a troop of landscapers armed with shiny rakes who call themselves "Sonny and Co."

Does it seem like I am saying the rakes call themselves "Sonny and Co."? If so, how would I fix this? Also, does the rest of the sentence flow coherently? How could I possibly improve it? (if it doesn't flow e
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Please don't double post, Anon. If you are unclear about an answer you have received, please post your followup question to the original thread.

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