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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Does this sentence is gramatically correct?

Hello!

I would be thankful if you could tell me - is this sentence okay? Any improvements necessary?

With regard to the risk situations, especially those related to the use of information and communication technologies, Dutch Internet Association, within operations of the Safer Internet Centre, in cooperation with partners thereof and upon receiving 75% co-financing from the European Union Safer Internet programme, performs educational work in the field of Internet safety.

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With regard to the risks, especially those in the use of information and communication technologies, the Dutch Internet Association, within the Safer Internet Centre, in cooperation with its partners and upon receiving 75% financing from the European Union Safer Internet programme, offers education in Internet safety.

— Mister Micawber

  • With regard to the risks, especially those in the use of information and communication technologies, the Dutch Internet Association, within the Safer Internet Centre, in cooperation with its partners and upon receiving 75% financing from the European Union Safer Internet programme, offers education in Internet safety.
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With regard to the risks, especially those in the use of information and communication technologies, the Dutch Internet Association, within the Safer Internet Centre, in cooperation with its partners and upon receiving 75% financing from the European Union Safer Internet programme, offers education in Internet safety.
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Anonymous Does this sentence is gramatically correct? Is this sentence grammatically correct?
The question is grammatically incorrect. You can't ask a question with both 'does' and 'is'. See above.

CJ
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