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TeacherJapan Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Does this sentence flow well?

First of all, experiencing a new culture enables you see things from entirely different perspectives and by doing so, cultivate your mind and make you mature.

Is it better to use ‘thereby’ instead?

First of all, experiencing a new culture enables you see things from entirely different perspectives, thereby cultivating your mind and make you mature.


  

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First of all, experiencing a new culture enables you to see things from entirely different perspectives, thereby cultivating your mind and making you mature.

  • First of all, experiencing a new culture enables you to see things from entirely different perspectives, thereby cultivating your mind and making you mature.
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First of all, experiencing a new culture enables you to see things from entirely different perspectives, thereby cultivating your mind and making you mature.

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