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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Does this sentence flow well?

Does this flow well?

"The answer is to push the benefits of the product or service you’re selling. I.e. tell your customers what it will do for them - how it will make their life easier, the time it will save them, the money they will be able to spend instead on holidays, cars, new kitchens etc.""

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e. tell your customers what it will do for them- how it will make their life easier, save them time it will save them, the and save them money which they will be able to can spend instead on holidays, cars, new kitchens etc.

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  • tell your customers what it will do for them- how it will make their life easier, save them time it will save them, the and save them money which they will be able to can spend instead on holidays, cars, new kitchens etc.
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AnonymousThe answer is to push the benefits of the product or service you’re selling, i.e. tell your customers what it will do for them- how it will make their life easier, save them time it will save them, the and save them money which they will be able to can spend instead on holidays, cars, new kitchens et
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I didn't think it flowed well either. And, that's from a blog about copywriting!!
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