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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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"This year, I have been volunteering at the Edinburgh Hospital pharmacy. The duties and tasks performed such as processing a prescription and stock-taking have provided me an insight into how a pharmacy is run. The experience gained will assist me to perform better as a prospective intern pharmacist."
This is a paragraph that I intend to include in my cover letter for the application of an intern position next year.
Cheers
This is a paragraph that I intend to include in my cover letter for the application of an intern position next year.
Cheers
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Anonymous "This year, I have been volunteering at the Edinburgh Hospital pharmacy. The duties and tasks I have performed , such as processing a prescription and stock-taking, have provided me an insight into how a pharmacy is run. " This is a paragraph that I intend to include in my cover letter for the application of an intern position next year.
- Anonymous "This year, I have been volunteering at the Edinburgh Hospital pharmacy.
- The duties and tasks I have performed , such as processing a prescription and stock-taking, have provided me an insight into how a pharmacy is run.
- " This is a paragraph that I intend to include in my cover letter for the application of an intern position next year.
- Cheers Note red suggestion and punctuation.
- Otherwise, ok.
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Anonymous"This year, I have been volunteering at the Edinburgh Hospital pharmacy. The duties and tasks I have performed, such as processing a prescription and stock-taking, have provided me an insight into how a pharmacy is run. The experience gained will assist me to perform better as a prospective intern pharmacist."
This is a paragraph that I intend to
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