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Does this sentece make sense?

Does this sentencemake sense?
The Cold War was an arms race and power struggle between the Union of Soviet Socialist Republics (USSR) and the United States that threatened the ideology of government and democracy of both nations, and lasted over forty-five years
  

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Almost. ' Democracy' seems lost in there. Perhaps: The Cold War was an arms race and power struggle between the Union of Soviet Socialist Republics (USSR) and the United States that threatened the political ideologies of both nations and lasted over forty-five years.

  • Almost.
  • ' Democracy' seems lost in there.
  • Perhaps: The Cold War was an arms race and power struggle between the Union of Soviet Socialist Republics (USSR) and the United States that threatened the political ideologies of both nations and lasted over forty-five years.
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Almost. ' Democracy' seems lost in there. Perhaps:

The Cold War was an arms race and power struggle between the Union of Soviet Socialist Republics (USSR) and the United States that threatened the political ideologies of both nations and lasted over forty-five years.
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