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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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"In the novel, too much power lead to killing, extra labor for other animals, and something that was so unthinkable for them before, which was resembling the humans by drinking, wearing clothes, sleeping on beds."
  

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In the novel, too much power leads to killing, extra labor for other animals, and something that was so unthinkable for them before: resembling the humans by drinking, wearing clothes, and sleeping on beds.

  • In the novel, too much power leads to killing, extra labor for other animals, and something that was so unthinkable for them before: resembling the humans by drinking, wearing clothes, and sleeping on beds.
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In the novel, too much power leads to killing, extra labor for other animals, and something that was so unthinkable for them before: resembling the humans by drinking, wearing clothes, and sleeping on beds.

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