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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Does this read well?

This sentence sounds great in my head, but I'm not sure if it's written well, or even correctly:

"Some consider the diplomacy of the Thebians to be a point of honor; others, a point of weakness."

Can the word "diplomacy" be used in this way? I am using it to mean "respectful diplomatic behavior". Also, is the use of semi-colons and commas correct?

Thank you!
  

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It reads well to me.

  • It reads well to me.
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It reads well to me.

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