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Macy1357 Posted 11 years ago
does this poem make sence
Then and Now
From the day I was born
They saw me come down the hall
They held me in their arms
Hoping they wouldn’t drop me.
Over years past we would always
Play together
I would stop what I was doing just to
Hang out with them.
They brought me to show and tell at school.
And I was excited to cheer them on at games
When I rode my bike for the first time they cheered me on.
They were there when I shop a basketball
On a 6 FT hoop when I was 6
I soon will be the only child at home and that scares me.
I’m going to miss going to school together
asking me how my day was.
From the day they graduated
I was there to cheer them on
I held them in my arms
Hoping I would never let go.
From the day I was born
They saw me come down the hall
They held me in their arms
Hoping they wouldn’t drop me.
Over years past we would always
Play together
I would stop what I was doing just to
Hang out with them.
They brought me to show and tell at school.
And I was excited to cheer them on at games
When I rode my bike for the first time they cheered me on.
They were there when I shop a basketball
On a 6 FT hoop when I was 6
I soon will be the only child at home and that scares me.
I’m going to miss going to school together
asking me how my day was.
From the day they graduated
I was there to cheer them on
I held them in my arms
Hoping I would never let go.
Top answer
Hello, macy1357 —and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member. macy1357 D oes this poem make sense?
- Hello, macy1357 —and welcome to English Forums.
- Thank you for registering as a member.
- macy1357 D oes this poem make sense?
- It makes sense, but it is not a poem: it has no meter or internal rhythm, it includes no figures of speech or rhetoric.
- It is simply a few paragraphs broken into arbitrary lines.
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Hello, macy1357 —and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member.
macy1357Does this poem make sense?It makes sense, but it is not a poem: it has no meter or internal rhythm, it includes no figures of speech or rhetoric. It is simply a few paragraphs broke
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