Does this make sense to a english speaker?

Can you tell me if this makes sense to you and if so if you think it needs correcting?

If you compare me to John in his wife's eyes, who do you think would win. John might be the best person but John in his wife's eye's is the best person ever. If the public sees what his wife sees in him, I've got no shot at winning. I have to make sure people see him for who he really is.

Thank you so much