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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Does this make sense - read well?

I had spoken with John last night, when, during our engaging conversation about your mother, he told me of her secret lover, who I have only recently come to know as being that dishevelled man we all try avoid should our misfortune have us bump into him in the village.

Does this read ok? I am practising writing my English.
  

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Like the other paragraph you posted, this us in rather mock-archaic style that does not sound natural for something written in the twenty-first century.

  • Like the other paragraph you posted, this us in rather mock-archaic style that does not sound natural for something written in the twenty-first century.
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Like the other paragraph you posted, this us in rather mock-archaic style that does not sound natural for something written in the twenty-first century.

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