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From the 4th to the 2nd century B.C., thousands of terracotta anatomical votives were deposited by worshippers in central Italian sanctuaries. While no fewer than 150 sites and their respective cults proximal to such sanctuaries are known to exist, anatomical votives have been unearthed at fewer than one-quarter of them. Indeed, while the votive tradition is practised across societies today, for example, the panoply of votives in churches such as the Mezzogiorno, Italy,it is archaeological evidence from prolific excavations such as Fregellae and Ponte di Nona that provides a glimpse into the emergence and use of votives in Republican Rome during the 4th – 2nd centuries BC.
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anonymous Do these sentences make perfect sense? Mostly. With "Indeed, while …", you seem to say that modern practice could provide a glimpse into the emergence of the practice and that the paucity of sites speaks to that.
- anonymous Do these sentences make perfect sense?
- Mostly.
- With "Indeed, while …", you seem to say that modern practice could provide a glimpse into the emergence of the practice and that the paucity of sites speaks to that.
- This is puzzling.
- "During" does not go well with the time frame.
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anonymousDo these sentences make perfect sense?
Mostly. With "Indeed, while …", you seem to say that modern practice could provide a glimpse into the emergence of the practice and that the paucity of sites speaks to that. This is puzzling. "During" does not go well with the time frame. I might make it "Rome from the 4th to 2nd centuries B.C."
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