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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Does this make sense?

Hi. Does this make sense? Could it be written better?

She stumbled into a table and took down bottles with her.

- meaning that she landed on the floor with bottles which were on the table.

  

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anonymous Does this make sense? It makes sense as you explained it, but there's not enough information in the sentence itself to tell the whole story. You might try something like this: She stumbled into the table with the bottles on it and [found herself / ended up] on the floor with the bottles.

  • anonymous Does this make sense?
  • It makes sense as you explained it, but there's not enough information in the sentence itself to tell the whole story.
  • You might try something like this: She stumbled into the table with the bottles on it and [found herself / ended up] on the floor with the bottles.
  • CJ
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anonymousDoes this make sense?

It makes sense as you explained it, but there's not enough information in the sentence itself to tell the whole story.

You might try something like this:

She stumbled into the table with the bottles on it and [found herself / ended up] on the floor with the bottles.

CJ

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