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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Does this make sense?

"We continue to win more projects by offering real added value to our projects."

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The "projects ... projects" repetition is stylistically weak, and it raises questions about whether and why the projects that you "win" are termed "our" projects.

— GPY

  • The "projects ...
  • projects" repetition is stylistically weak, and it raises questions about whether and why the projects that you "win" are termed "our" projects.
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The "projects ... projects" repetition is stylistically weak, and it raises questions about whether and why the projects that you "win" are termed "our" projects.
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Yes, I thought so!!! I thought I was going mad, so I thought I'd post it in the forum. Thanks Emotion: smile
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