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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Does this make sense?

Ingrid

My body hurts; my feelings hurt; my breath even hurts, for age is taking my youth, and I am fading into the night. But know this, my daughter, my beautiful princess, of how envious I am of your fragrant beaut, which I myself had once possessed; of how jealous I am of your ambition, of your prince charming who shall have you with a child and this happiness you speak of. Of how much I wish for you to be me, decrepit, useless and dying, you are the most prized of all my possessions. I do not know of love, but I am sure whatever it may be, I love you. I hope these words will forever be of consolation to you, that when I am dancing with the stars, as I had once danced with your father, you will think of me as having provided you with a wealth fit for the queen that you are. My advice to you would be, do not let it consume you as it consumed me; live the life I could never live…

do my words make sense? how to avoid writing long sentences?
  

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Mother! Come back! Don’t leave me!

  • Mother!
  • Come back!
  • Don’t leave me!
  • Why must you always leave me!
  • I have only ever loved you, but never could you find it in yourself to love me; your daughter; your own flesh and blood.
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Mother! Come back! Don’t leave me! Why must you always leave me! I have only ever loved you, but never could you find it in yourself to love me; your daughter; your own flesh and blood. I only ever wanted to see you smile; to have that face of yours light up like… I don’t know…the time when I was young…

Do you remember when I was a child? The time when you and my father had planned for a
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Elysnai kisses and hugs her dead mother, while crying uncontrollably

Malvious

It is in times of great loss like this, that we come to learn of our true nature. Larkin once said that…
Elysnai

I don’t care for what Larkin said *** **** it! Can you not see I am grieving?
Malvious

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