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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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- Feeling excited and ecstatic, my friends and I are very eager to share some of our thoughts about the upcoming Summer Festival. We have some fabulous ideas and I am very certain that many others would also like it ( including my 70 years old grandpa).
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Anonymous Feeling excited and ecstatic, my friends and I are very eager to share some of our thoughts about the upcoming Summer Festival. We have some fabulous ideas , and I am very certain that many others would also like it ( including my 70 years old grandpa). Yes, it makes sense, but it is very loosely composed.
- Anonymous Feeling excited and ecstatic, my friends and I are very eager to share some of our thoughts about the upcoming Summer Festival.
- We have some fabulous ideas , and I am very certain that many others would also like it ( including my 70 years old grandpa).
- Yes, it makes sense, but it is very loosely composed.
- Note the added comma.
- I'm not sure what it refers to.
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Anonymous Feeling excited and ecstatic, my friends and I are very eager to share some of our thoughts about the upcoming Summer Festival. We have some fabulous ideas, and I am very certain that many others would also like it ( including
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