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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Does this make sense ?

Does this make sense? Is there anything you would change to make it natural?

I wanted to put lime cordial in a bottle of water but didn't know if I had enough cordial to make it as strong in lime flavor as I like to have it so I decided to put the cordial in a cup and pour water and drink glass at a time till no cordial was left so I could have it as strong as I like it.

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This sentence is too long to be free of mistakes. See if you can make it less like something from Proust.

  • This sentence is too long to be free of mistakes.
  • See if you can make it less like something from Proust.
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This sentence is too long to be free of mistakes. See if you can make it less like something from Proust. Emotion: wink

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