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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Does this make sense?
Does this make sense?
If you do a water change every 8 days as opposed to every 7 days, you''ll have one less water change to do every 7 weeks.
If you do a water change every 8 days as opposed to every 7 days, you''ll have one less water change to do every 7 weeks.
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Yes, that's good. It's a hard idea to get across, so the sentence will seem a bit confusing at first, but its meaning is clear enough. You could change "If you do a water change every 8 days" to "If you change the water every 8 days", for a slight improvement.
- Yes, that's good.
- It's a hard idea to get across, so the sentence will seem a bit confusing at first, but its meaning is clear enough.
- You could change "If you do a water change every 8 days" to "If you change the water every 8 days", for a slight improvement.
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- eight and seven .
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Yes, that's good. It's a hard idea to get across, so the sentence will seem a bit confusing at first, but its meaning is clear enough.
You could change "If you do a water change every 8 days" to "If you change the water every 8 days", for a slight improvement. Also, numbers under 11 are normall spelled out, i.e. eight and seven. Other than that, I don't think I
You could change "If you do a water change every 8 days" to "If you change the water every 8 days", for a slight improvement. Also, numbers under 11 are normall spelled out, i.e. eight and seven. Other than that, I don't think I
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