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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Does this make sense?
Hey 
I made this quote and I'm in my first year English so I wanted to ask if this is right:
And I see how they fall apart.
I try to help,
but I can't and they don't want me to.
Someday they will be gone...
And I'll be still here watching.
I made this quote and I'm in my first year English so I wanted to ask if this is right:And I see how they fall apart.
I try to help,
but I can't and they don't want me to.
Someday they will be gone...
And I'll be still here watching.
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The English is OK, but watch the mechanics and the sense. How can you still be watching what you see when they're gone? Don't write in punctuation, write in words, but mind the punctuation at the same time.
- The English is OK, but watch the mechanics and the sense.
- How can you still be watching what you see when they're gone?
- Don't write in punctuation, write in words, but mind the punctuation at the same time.
- Don't start a sentence with a conjunction unless you have a good reason to.
- You call it a quote, but I don't know what you mean by that.
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The English is OK, but watch the mechanics and the sense. How can you still be watching what you see when they're gone? Don't write in punctuation, write in words, but mind the punctuation at the same time. Don't start a sentence with a conjunction unless you have a good reason to. You call it a quote, but I don't know what you mean by that.
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