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Mitsuo23 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Does this make sense?
Hi all,
a stupid sounded question again, but this helps me to understand English so.. please!!
My question is, does this make sense as a copy?
"Help You Hit the Top 25"
I'm a freelance translator and one of the iPhone apps I translated just hit the number 1 (No.1!!!) so if I put the sentence at the end of my emails, with my signature, does it make sense?
What does the sentence make you imagine generally?
Thanks for your opinion in advance,
J
a stupid sounded question again, but this helps me to understand English so.. please!!
My question is, does this make sense as a copy?
"Help You Hit the Top 25"
I'm a freelance translator and one of the iPhone apps I translated just hit the number 1 (No.1!!!) so if I put the sentence at the end of my emails, with my signature, does it make sense?
What does the sentence make you imagine generally?
Thanks for your opinion in advance,
J
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To me, it sounds awkward without the subject. It doesn't work for me. It sounds like an imperative statement.
- To me, it sounds awkward without the subject.
- It doesn't work for me.
- It sounds like an imperative statement.
- Help [yourself] hit the top 25!
- We help you hit the top 25!
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To me, it sounds awkward without the subject. It doesn't work for me.
It sounds like an imperative statement.
Help [yourself] hit the top 25!
We help you hit the top 25!
[This] helps you hit the top 25!
(But these all lack style.)
Hit the top 25! (ie, do it!)
It sounds like an imperative statement.
Help [yourself] hit the top 25!
We help you hit the top 25!
[This] helps you hit the top 25!
(But these all lack style.)
Hit the top 25! (ie, do it!)
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