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Walleezh Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Does this make sense?

The dedication and passion make his skills unsurpassed.

i need it perfect because I'm going to imprint it on a necklace.

any errors, just feel free to reword it or edit it.
  

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Hi, Welcome to the Forum. I suggest this change. The His dedication and passion make his skills unsurpassed.

— Clive

  • Hi, Welcome to the Forum.
  • I suggest this change.
  • The His dedication and passion make his skills unsurpassed.
  • You don't want to use the person's name?
  • Clive
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Hi,
Welcome to the Forum.

I suggest this change.

The His dedication and passion make his skills unsurpassed.

You don't want to use the person's name?

Clive
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