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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Does this make sence to you?

Hi!

Is the underlined part describing two different ages of children correct?

Nutritionists recommend it not only for adults, but also for children of school age and those younger (from 3 years up).

Thank you!
  

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It makes sense , but it could be improved. but also for children three years of age and up. [ I think 'children' includes 'school age'.

  • It makes sense , but it could be improved.
  • but also for children three years of age and up.
  • [ I think 'children' includes 'school age'.
  • Good use of the parallel structure not only / but also !
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It makes sense, but it could be improved. ...but also for children three years of age and up. [ I think 'children' includes 'school age'. Good use of the parallel structure not only / but also !

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