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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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are there any corrections necessary? Can you understand everything?

Bank undertakes to transfer the sum of corresponding Transactions to the Account in 3 (three) working days of Swedbank upon receiving data comparison report concerning corresponding day’s Transactions in the Merchant’s terminal connected to the Swedbank system, if the report has been received from the Merchant no later than in 5 (five) days.

very much appreciated!!
  

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It is not clear. I think you need legal counsel to write contract language. For example, the word "undertake" is probably not enforceable, just as "try" is not, either.

  • It is not clear.
  • I think you need legal counsel to write contract language.
  • For example, the word "undertake" is probably not enforceable, just as "try" is not, either.
  • Five days from when?
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It is not clear. I think you need legal counsel to write contract language. For example, the word "undertake" is probably not enforceable, just as "try" is not, either.

Five days from when?

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