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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Motivation of Jane Smith to take care of the child is consistent, and opinion expressed by her is in the best interests of the child.

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Jane Smith's motivation to take care of the child is consistent , and the opinion she expressed is in the best interests of the child. The underlined word is a bit strange in this context.

  • Jane Smith's motivation to take care of the child is consistent , and the opinion she expressed is in the best interests of the child.
  • The underlined word is a bit strange in this context.
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Jane Smith's motivation to take care of the child is consistent, and the opinion she expressed is in the best interests of the child.

The underlined word is a bit strange in this context.

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