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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Does this iemail teaser for an event make sense? any corrects needed?
"What has 8 Zebras, 5 hippos, 4 lions, 3 giraffes and ice-cream got in common?"
Bulla’s 100th Anniversary Family Day
Bring your family to Werribee Open Range Zoo
On Sunday 21 March 2010
You can look forward to receiving your invitation to this memorable event in your next pay slip.
Bulla’s 100th Anniversary Family Day
Bring your family to Werribee Open Range Zoo
On Sunday 21 March 2010
You can look forward to receiving your invitation to this memorable event in your next pay slip.
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I'm assuming the first line is the subject line and the rest is the body of the email. " Bulla’s 100 th Anniversary Family Day ! Bring your family to Werribee Open Range Zoo o n Sunday 21 March 2010 .
- I'm assuming the first line is the subject line and the rest is the body of the email.
- " Bulla’s 100 th Anniversary Family Day !
- Bring your family to Werribee Open Range Zoo o n Sunday 21 March 2010 .
- You can look forward to receiving your invitation to this memorable event with your next payslip .
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I'm assuming the first line is the subject line and the rest is the body of the email. A couple of suggestions:
"What do 8 zebras, 5 hippos, 4 lions, 3 giraffes and ice-cream have in common?"
Bulla’s 100th Anniversary Family Day!
Bring your family to
"What do 8 zebras, 5 hippos, 4 lions, 3 giraffes and ice-cream have in common?"
Bulla’s 100th Anniversary Family Day!
Bring your family to
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