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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Does this have a weak or strong thesis statement
Technology has improved in time, however, this has lead many people to isolation.
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It is a strong idea for a thesis for a paper, however, I think the sentence can be strengthened. I'd try: Dramatic innovations in technology in the past two decades have revolutionized entertainment and communications, while ironically resulting in many people living lives of increasing isolation.
- It is a strong idea for a thesis for a paper, however, I think the sentence can be strengthened.
- I'd try: Dramatic innovations in technology in the past two decades have revolutionized entertainment and communications, while ironically resulting in many people living lives of increasing isolation.
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It is a strong idea for a thesis for a paper, however, I think the sentence can be strengthened.
I'd try:
Dramatic innovations in technology in the past two decades have revolutionized entertainment and communications, while ironically resulting in many people living lives of increasing isolation.
I'd try:
Dramatic innovations in technology in the past two decades have revolutionized entertainment and communications, while ironically resulting in many people living lives of increasing isolation.
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