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Friendship to me is just like a treasure. It is better than haven all the money in the world. You could have all the money in the world ,but you will be lonely. I would rather have a friend that I could trust and talk to about everything. They will be there to cheer you up in the times you need the most. A friendship is where you can go out and have a good time no matter where you go , or what you do.A freindship is when u take the time to learn and listen to another person's problems and life general. You also lern about the things that person likes to do and see and has intrest in,for a example; cars, cloths style, music, food, drinks,tv shows, basicaly things that intrest them . When you get the fill on what that person likes to do then you can go out and have a fantastic time together in the world no mater what you do. Thats what Friendship is to me.
  

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Anonymous Friendship to me is just like a treasure. It is better than having all the money in the world. You could have all the money in the world ,[space] but you will be lonely.

  • Anonymous Friendship to me is just like a treasure.
  • It is better than having all the money in the world.
  • You could have all the money in the world ,[space] but you will be lonely.
  • I would rather have a friend whom [or omit the word] I could trust and talk to about everything.
  • They will be there to cheer you up in the times you need it the most.
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Friendship to me is just like a treasure. It is better than having all the money in the world. You could have all the money in the world,[space] but you will be lonely. I would rather have a friend whom [or omit the word] I could trust and talk to about everything. They will be there to cheer you up in the times you

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