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Prettycat Posted 17 years ago
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I have translated this article from arabic into English, and i want to know whether it sounds good in english or not , and if there are any grammatical mistakes or any other mistakes!
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Abu Bakr-Alrazi




He is the father of the Arabian medicine, and an expert of medicine in in the seventeenth century. Besides, many consider him the founder of modern chemistry in east and west.



Alrazi was born in Alrai, one of Persia cities, southern in 854, and died in 932. He was known for medicine and chemistry, and mixing between them .In his book " Alfehrest " Ebn-Annadeem said:" Alrazi was in his time, as he had the knowledge of all the ancient sciences, especially medicine". He also called him " The Arabs' Galenus".



His most well-known books are:" The Spiritual Medicine ",

"Secrets in Chemistry', " Alhawy ", " Almansori ", and " The Medicine of the Poor ". At the time, there was a common saying: " Medicine was dead, however, Galenus brought it into life; medicine was separated and Alrazi gathered it together". Alrazi's books were translated into European languages, and many of European scholars used them in their works and studies. On top of that, his books remained as their only source till the seventeenth century.



Alrazi treasured man's mind, and considered it as one of the greatest blessings of Allah (God ) upon human beings. For with mind, man is able to make use of nature around him, and it is mind that distinguishes man from an animal.



  

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Place book titles in italics, not quotation marks. Abu Bakr-Alrazi Abu Bakr-Alrazi was the father of Arabian medicine and a medical expert in Europe in the seventeenth century . Many in both the East and West consider him the founder of modern chemistry .

  • Place book titles in italics, not quotation marks.
  • Abu Bakr-Alrazi Abu Bakr-Alrazi was the father of Arabian medicine and a medical expert in Europe in the seventeenth century .
  • Many in both the East and West consider him the founder of modern chemistry .
  • Bakr-Alrazi was born in Alrai , a Persian city, now southern Tehran , in 854, and he died in 932.
  • He was known for his integrating of medicine and chemistry.
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Place book titles in italics, not quotation marks.

Abu Bakr-Alrazi

Abu Bakr-Alrazi was the father of Arabian medicine and a medical expert in Europe in the seventeenth century. Many in both the East and West consider him the founder of modern chemistry .

Bakr-Alrazi was born in Alrai, a Persian city, now southern Tehran

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