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Wangqh2696122 Posted 14 years ago
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Does the underlined part sound natural?

After the flooding, people were suffering in that area, who urgently needed clean water, medicine, and shelter to survive.
  

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No; you will have to recast: After the flooding, people were suffering in that area : they urgently needed clean water, medicine, and shelter to survive.

  • No; you will have to recast: After the flooding, people were suffering in that area : they urgently needed clean water, medicine, and shelter to survive.
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No; you will have to recast:

After the flooding, people were suffering in that area: they urgently needed clean water, medicine, and shelter to survive.
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wangqh2696122After the flooding, people were suffering in that area and urgently needed clean water, medicine, and shelter to survive.

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